Friday, July 11, 2008

ginger ale

nutrition is what is said on the bottle,
is it fact or fiction or what keeps us fuzzy,
it is almost 3 in the morning,
n i am kept awake by useless n detrimental thoughts,
i see you the way i want to,
i feel you the way it is meant to,
i smell you the way my armpit smells,
strong,pungent and distinct.

2 Comments:

Blogger Hamdan said...

Sources to good writing materials ada tiga; mind, heart, and soul. Check your mind there are things or hard facts to share (google banyak menolong). Emotions strictly yours and reside in your heart, but choose what you want to write and say because heart nie tak tentu arah, tak reti nak duduk diam, takde batasan dan penghujungnya. As for the soul, it serves as the captain which can guide someone from darkness. Here lies the rationale, the discipline, the humanity, and the conclusion. Menulis nie juga kebolehan mendengar bisikan suara dari dalam..ada unsur thinking secara narrative.

I think your writing reflects the three,tapi as you say bersepah-sepah. Mula mula memanglah. Macam mula first time dating girlfriend lah, bersepah-sepah tak tersusun. Nak ajak dating tepi laut atau dalam taman? Nak pegang dulu ke atau nak cakap dulu atau tak usah buat apa-apa dulu, apa lagi kalau dating dgn orang cantik semacam you..hahha
Tapi boyfriend you semuanya pandai pandai..dia ajak you makan dulu.Kan romantik and gentleman..!!haha

About berahsia dengan daily routine tu, my heart says and menyanyikan lagu ni, biarlah rahsia..

6:18 PM  
Blogger soedaydah said...

er,terima kasih utk tips2 anda..wat i post here are random just as hw random i cn be in real life...a graceful swine is a vessel for all the gibberish thats cluttering my head..so as not to waste paper n help conserve trees thus the environment,this blog is an electronic buku conteng.mcm kt skolah dulu...i had too much chocolate today..n my head is filled with fluorescent n puffy clouds with cherubic goblins sharing a joint together..

9:45 AM  

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